This came in from Anne at Is this a boarding house or something? Her son Alex had eye surgery when he was 7 1/2 for strabismus and amblyopia. This is the poem that he wrote a month after the surgery. All of the original spelling has been preserved. I really love the cadence and rhythm that Alex sets up in this poem. It took me back to some of my fears when Zoe had her surgery. -Ann Z
My Surgery by Alex
scared
to
deth
almost
crying
eye
turned
haert
beting
fast
operaiting
room
talking
asleep
stiches
eye
straiter
happy
What a talented writer! I am so glad that he is happy with the way the surgery turned out.
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Thank you for sharing this! I love the rhythm, which felt like anxiety to me.
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